Torito is a 6 month old boy who lives in Guadalajara, Mexico
in a rancho called El Rancho Blanco. Which he and his family live in really
poor conditions and they have the American dream. Of getting to California and
having a better life and education. But one day he got sick and his parents
took him to the hospital because he was getting worst every minute. However his
parents had no money to pay the hospital so know his father had to work harder
to get money to pay the hospital. But
when he was at the hospital the doctor said that he may die because his disease
was really weird and that only a miracle will save him. But thank god the doctor
was wrong because that miracle happen and Torito got better.

Its a very good post becuase you explain wht does his family wants. You did well. Well thats all.
ReplyDeleteIts a good post but you need to explain mor eabout the family and what they all want you did good.:)
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